- David Leviathan & Rachel Cohn -
Eh, it was okay. Definitely cute, but the teenagers were a bit too teenagery in this one for me, and Naomi's use of symbols in place of words drove me a bit insane.
Also did not like the fact that Bruce the First just disappeared from the POV shifts once his part was done, as did Bruce the Second a bit. Almost would have been better if it was just Naomi and Ely had the POV, because it came across a little bit unbalanced as it was. Then again, neither Ely or Naomi were particularly nice people so that might have cut the sweetness to non existent.
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